Last minute fixes and updates

Author: RoseHJM

articles/dev-box/concept-dev-box-concepts.md

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 # Microsoft Dev Box key concepts
 
-This article describes the key concepts and components of Microsoft Dev Box preview. 
+This article describes the key concepts and components of Microsoft Dev Box. 
 
 ## Dev center
 
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ When creating a network connection, you must choose whether to use a native Azur
 The virtual network specified in a network connection also determines the region for the dev box. You can create multiple network connections based on the regions where you support developers and use them when creating different dev box pools to ensure dev box users create a dev box in a region close to them. Using a region close to the dev box user provides the best experience. 
 
 ## Dev box pool 
-A dev box pool is a collection of dev boxes that you manage together because they require similar settings. You can create multiple dev box pools to support the needs of hybrid teams working in different regions or on different workloads.
+A dev box pool is a collection of dev boxes that you manage together that you manage together and to which you apply similar settings. You can create multiple dev box pools to support the needs of hybrid teams working in different regions or on different workloads.
 
 ## Dev box 
 A dev box is a preconfigured ready-to-code workstation that you create through the self-service developer portal. The new dev box has all the tools, binaries, and configuration required for a dev box user to be productive immediately. You can create and manage multiple dev boxes to work on multiple work streams. As a dev box user you have control over your own dev boxes - you can create more as you need them, and delete them when you have finished using them.

articles/dev-box/includes/note-dev-box-runs-on-creation.md

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 > [!IMPORTANT]
-> A dev box is automatically started and running when the creation process completes. Dev boxes incur billing costs whenever they are running.
+> A dev box is automatically started and running when the creation process completes. Dev boxes incur costs whenever they are running.

articles/dev-box/includes/note-permission-to-create-dev-box.md

@@ -7,4 +7,4 @@ ms.service: dev-box
 ---
 
 > [!IMPORTANT]
-> Assigning Dev Box Project Admin, owner, or contributor permissions for a project does not give the user permission to create dev boxes. You must assign the Dev Box User role to enable users to create dev boxes.
+> Users assigned the Dev Box User role or Project Admin role can create dev boxes. 

articles/dev-box/overview-what-is-microsoft-dev-box.md

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 Microsoft Dev Box gives you self-service access to high-performance, preconfigured, and ready-to-code cloud-based workstations called dev boxes. You can set up dev boxes with the tools, source code, and pre-built binaries specific to your project, so you can immediately start work. Whether you’re a developer, tester, or QA professional, you can use dev boxes in your day-to-day workflows. 
 
-The Dev Box service was designed with three distinct personas in mind: dev center owners, project admins, and dev box users. 
+The Dev Box service was designed with three distinct personas in mind: dev infra admins, project admins, and dev box users. 
 
-Dev center owners create and manage dev centers, which represent the units of organization within an enterprise. Any user with sufficient permissions on the subscription or resource group can create a dev center. Dev center owners create projects and define the images that are used to create dev boxes. Dev box image definitions can use any developer IDE, SDK, or internal tool that runs on Windows. 
+Dev infra admins are responsible for providing developer infrastructure and tools to the dev teams. Dev infra admins create and manage dev centers, which represent the units of organization within an enterprise. Any user with sufficient permissions on the subscription or resource group can create a dev center. Dev infra admins create projects and define the images that are used to create dev boxes. Dev box image definitions can use any developer IDE, SDK, or internal tool that runs on Windows. 
 
 Project admins are experienced developers with in depth knowledge of their projects who can assist with day-to-day administrative tasks. Project admins create and manage dev box pools, enabling developers in different regions to self-serve dev boxes. 
 
@@ -41,11 +41,10 @@ Microsoft Dev Box bridges the gap between development teams and IT, bringing con
     - Each pool brings together a SKU, an image, and a network configuration that automatically joins the dev box to your native Azure Active Directory (Azure AD) or Active Directory domain. This combination gives teams flexibility to define specific development environments for any scenario.
 - **Control costs**
     - Dev Box brings cost control within the reach of project admins. 
-    - Use stop schedules for individual dev box pools to make sure dev boxes shut down when not needed. Dev box users can postpone the shutdown if they're still working. 
 - **Team scenarios**
     - Create dev boxes for various roles on a team. Standard dev boxes might be configured with admin rights, giving full-time developers greater control, while more restricted permissions are applied for contractors.
 
-### For dev infrastructure managers
+### For dev infrastructure admins
 - **Configure dev centers**
     - Create dev centers and define the SKUs and images that the development teams use to self-serve dev boxes. 
 - **Configure the network connection**

articles/dev-box/quickstart-configure-dev-box-project.md

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 # Quickstart: Configure a Microsoft Dev Box project
-To enable developers to self-serve dev boxes from projects, you must configure dev box pools that specify the dev box definitions available. Dev box users create dev boxes using the dev box pool. 
+To enable developers to self-serve dev boxes in projects, you must configure dev box pools that specify the dev box definitions and network connections used when dev boxes are created. Dev box users create dev boxes using the dev box pool. 
 
 In this quickstart, you'll perform the following tasks:
 
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ If you don't have an available dev center with an existing dev box definition an
 
 1. Sign in to the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com).
 
-1. In the search box, type *Dev box* and select **Projects** from the list.
+1. In the search box, type *Projects* and then select **Projects** from the list.
    :::image type="content" source="./media/quickstart-configure-dev-box-projects/discovery-via-azure-portal.png" alt-text="Screenshot showing the Azure portal with the search box highlighted.":::
 
 2. Open the project in which you want to create the dev box pool.
@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ Before users can create dev boxes based on the dev box pools in a project, you m
 
 1. Sign in to the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com).
 
-1. In the search box, type *Dev box* and select **Projects** from the list.
+1. In the search box, type *Projects* and then select **Projects** from the list.
 
 1. Select the project you want to provide your team members access to.
 

articles/dev-box/quickstart-configure-dev-box-service.md

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 1. Sign in to the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com).
 
-1. In the search box, type *Dev box* and select **Dev centers** from the list.
-   :::image type="content" source="./media/quickstart-configure-dev-box-service/discovery-via-azure-portal.png" alt-text="Screenshot showing the Azure portal with the search box highlighted.":::
+1. In the search box, type *Dev centers* and then select **Dev centers** from the list.
+<!--   :::image type="content" source="./media/quickstart-configure-dev-box-service/discovery-via-azure-portal.png" alt-text="Screenshot showing the Azure portal with the search box highlighted."::: -->
 
 1. On the dev centers page, select **+Create**. 
    :::image type="content" source="./media/quickstart-configure-dev-box-service/create-dev-center.png" alt-text="Screenshot showing the Azure portal Dev center with create highlighted.":::
@@ -75,11 +75,11 @@ The following steps show you how to create and configure a dev center.
 ## Create a network connection
 Network connections determine the region into which dev boxes are deployed and allow them to be connected to your existing virtual networks. The following steps show you how to create and configure a network connection in Microsoft Dev Box.  
 
-To perform the steps in this section, you must have an existing virtual network (vnet) and subnet. If you don't have a vnet and subnet available, follow the instructions here: [Create, change, or delete a virtual network](/azure/virtual-network/manage-virtual-network?branch=main) to create them. 
+To perform the steps in this section, you must have an existing virtual network (vnet) and subnet. If you don't have a vnet and subnet available, follow the instructions here: [Create, change, or delete a virtual network](virtual-network/quick-create-portal?branch=main) to create them. 
 
 1. Sign in to the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com).
 
-1. In the search box, type *Dev box* and select **Network connections** from the list.
+1. In the search box, type *Network connections* and then select **Network connections** from the list.
 
 1. On the **Network Connections** page, select **+Create**.
      :::image type="content" source="./media/quickstart-configure-dev-box-service/network-connections-empty.png" alt-text="Screenshot showing the Network Connections page with Create highlighted.":::
@@ -130,7 +130,7 @@ To perform the steps in this section, you must have an existing virtual network
 ## Attach network connection to dev center
 You need to attach a network connection to a dev center before it can be used in projects to create dev box pools.
 
-1. In the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com), in the search box, type *Dev box* and select **Dev centers** from the list.
+1. In the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com), in the search box, type *Dev centers* and then select **Dev centers** from the list.
 
 1. Select the dev center you created and select **Networking**. 
 
@@ -160,12 +160,12 @@ The following steps show you how to create and configure a dev box definition. Y
    |Name|Value|Note|
    |----|----|----|
    |**Name**|Enter a descriptive name for your dev box definition.|
-   |**Image**|Select the base operating system for the dev box. You can select an image from the marketplace or from an Azure Compute Gallery.|To make custom images available for the dev box pool, you can attach an Azure Compute Gallery from an Azure Subscription that you manage. Learn [How to configure an Azure Compute Gallery](./how-to-configure-azure-compute-gallery.md).|
+   |**Image**|Select the base operating system for the dev box. You can select an image from the marketplace or from an Azure Compute Gallery.|To use custom images while creating a dev box definition, you can attach an Azure Compute Gallery that has the custom images. Learn [How to configure an Azure Compute Gallery](./how-to-configure-azure-compute-gallery.md).|
    |**Image version**|Select a specific, numbered version to ensure all the dev boxes in the pool always use the same version of the image. Select  **Latest** to ensure new dev boxes use the latest image available.|Selecting the Latest image version enables the dev box pool to use the most recent image version for your chosen image from the gallery. This way, the dev boxes created will stay up to date with the latest tools and code on your image. Existing dev boxes will not be modified when an image version is updated.|
 
    :::image type="content" source="./media/quickstart-configure-dev-box-service/dev-box-definition-create.png" alt-text="Screenshot showing the create dev box definition page with suggested images highlighted.":::
 
-   For your image, consider using either of these Cloud PCs:
+   While selecting the gallery image, consider using either of the two images:
    - Windows 11 Enterprise + Microsoft 365 Apps 21H2
    - Windows 10 Enterprise + Microsoft 365 Apps 21H2
 
@@ -177,7 +177,7 @@ The following steps show you how to create and configure a dev box definition. Y
 
 The following steps show you how to create and configure a project in dev box.
 
-1. In the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com), in the search box, type *Dev box* and select **Projects**. 
+1. In the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com), in the search box, type *Projects* and then select **Projects** from the list. 
 
 1. On the Projects page,  select **+Create**.
 

articles/dev-box/quickstart-create-dev-box.md

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    :::image type="content" source="./media/quickstart-create-dev-box/add-dev-box.png" alt-text="Screenshot of the Add a dev box dialog box.":::
 
-1. Select **Add** to begin creating your dev box. 
+4. Select **Add** to begin creating your dev box. 
 
-4. You can track the progress of creation in the developer portal home page. 
+5. You can track the progress of creation in the developer portal home page. 
 
    :::image type="content" source="./media/quickstart-create-dev-box/dev-portal-creating.png" alt-text="Screenshot of the developer portal showing the Your dev box card with the status Creating.":::
 
@@ -62,6 +62,7 @@ For quick access in a browser tab, the developer portal links directly to a brow
 1. Sign in to the [developer portal](https://aka.ms/devbox-portal).
 
 1. To connect to a dev box, select **Open in browser**.
+
    :::image type="content" source="./media/quickstart-create-dev-box/dev-portal-card-rdp.png" alt-text="Screenshot of dev box card showing the Open in browser option.":::
 
 A new tab will open with an RD session to your dev box.
@@ -79,4 +80,4 @@ When no longer needed, you can delete your dev box.
 
 ## Next steps
 
-In this quickstart, you created a dev box through the developer portal. To learn more about Dev Box concepts, see [Concepts: Microsoft Dev Box key concepts](concept-dev-box-concepts.md).
+In this quickstart, you created a dev box through the developer portal. To learn how to connect to a dev box using a remote desktop app, see [Tutorial: Use the Remote Desktop client to connect to a dev box](./tutorial-connect-to-dev-box-with-remote-desktop-app.md).

articles/dev-box/tutorial-connect-to-dev-box-with-remote-desktop-app.md

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 You can view the dev boxes you're connected to in your Remote Desktop client's [Workspaces](/windows-server/remote/remote-desktop-services/clients/windowsdesktop#workspaces).
 
-Learn more about the [key concepts for Microsoft Dev Box](./concept-dev-box-concepts.md).
-
 In this tutorial, you'll learn how to:
 
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